March 1, 2010

A Surprise Awaits (Amanda story)

Filed under: Kritter stories — unwriter1 @ 5:53 am
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“Look out!”

“Thanks Alex. Guess I was daydreaming.”

“Daydreaming? About what Mandy?”

“Oh, just about all our adventures and that we haven’t been on one in a long time.”

“True, but if you keep daydreaming while crossing a road, your last adventure will take you across the rainbow bridge.”

As Amanda licked her guardian angel’s fur, they decided it was again time to travel.

“We haven’t seen Koko for a long time. I wonder how many new adoptees she has.”

“Or how many of the old ones are now out on their own.”

“Good Point, Alex”

Meanwhile over at Koko’s…

“Is everything ready Rabbit?”

“Almost Koko, almost”

“What’s left?”

“We’re waiting on the squirrels.”

It looks like we have something special going on. Well, Koko and family are busy so let’s check back with Amanda.

“Ready Alex? I told Mama where we are going.”

“Ready as ever”

“Mandy, look at this; the headline of the Leaves and Grass gazette says there’s a problem at Koko’s.”

“Oh no! What does it say is wrong?”

“That’s all it says. It doesn’t give any details.”

“We better hurry up. Maybe we can help.”

Although Amanda and Alex went as fast as they could, Koko knew ahead of time they were coming. Everything was ready.


“Huh? What’s up? What surprise? The paper said there was a problem here.”

“There was. You two weren’t here to help us celebrate the first anniversary of meeting ‘The Wild Bunch’.”

I guess kitties can blush. Let’s leave them alone for now so they can enjoy the party.


  1. Well, look who’s back! Good to see Amanda again, as well as her creator, Ron Twain!

    Good to see you writing! Enjoyed!

    Comment by Carol — March 1, 2010 @ 6:28 am | Reply

  2. What a sweet story. Glad to see you writing again.

    Comment by Latesha — March 1, 2010 @ 6:44 am | Reply

  3. Glad to see Amanda back on the big screen! Nice episode here, I enjoy the way you craft your animal characters’ dialog.

    Marvin D Wilson

    Comment by theoldsilly — March 1, 2010 @ 9:09 am | Reply

  4. Hi Ron,
    What a cute little story.


    Comment by Margaret Tanner — March 2, 2010 @ 3:50 pm | Reply

  5. Hi:

    I have already been watching unwriter1.wordpress.com being a lurker for quite some time now.
    I concluded that I might as well get involved and socialize with the people here.
    I’m hoping to meet a lot of wonderful folks and learn some good stuff.

    I am hoping this doesn’t get posted in the wrong place. Forgive me if this is inappropriate.


    Caption Writer

    Comment by sypepraisbusa — December 29, 2010 @ 8:58 am | Reply

    • Thank you for watching. Please keep reading.

      Comment by unwriter1 — December 29, 2010 @ 9:10 am | Reply

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